Gush! Annie...I love the fresh...inocent and happy mood of your pictures.! Lovely work!!!

This is good Annie!! well done simple shot. yes.. fresh is the word!!

Keith

I like this shot. I'm not really sure what it means, but I like the way the light plays off the floor through the plastic keychains. I think this photo might benifit from a slight rotation counter-clockwise so the bear's feet are more or less lined up. Nice job. Keep it up!

Light reflection looks like a 3D render, it's very strange but I like it

The idea isn't bad, playing with simple colored and transparent shapes.

But the shot itself leaves a lot to be desired.

First, the composition is trivial: it's a bunch of objects sitting dead in the middle of the frame. They don't call it "dead" in the middle without a reason. Try some asymmetrical composition, at least.

And second, the light is dull. Apart from the slightly colored figurines, most of the frame is filled with shapeless, colorless something. A table is my guess. No color, no clear shadow, no interesting texture to enhance the refraction in the plastic and the caustic, no reflection, no light to bring the subtle texture out - nothing. With a huge, burnt-in white glare of the window detracting from the subject.

In short, it's all accidental. I don't believe you have planned it, or even stopped to think or look at it and maybe rearrange it better. Not even bothered to take bracketed shots, or to try and minimize that glare, or to enhance the color afterwards. I don't even speak of adding lights to the scene and finding the best angle and framing.

As an artist, you have a right to be everything - except being trite. Never do something without doing your best. Please.

I'm not going to be so harsh with your critique. This photo has a lot of potential. You can do a lot to improve it. Firstly, you could crop out much of the backgraound and as Arehaus has suggested, off center the subject. The colors and lighting here are very nice but they could be vrought out a great deal by increasing contrast and saturation using your photography software program. The natural lighting is wonderful here and has produced some wonderful highlights. By increasing contrast and by also reducing brightness a bit you can easily emphasize those highlights.
Keep experimenting. You are doing well!

~~ Michelle ~~

arenhaus>> First, I want to tell you that I really appreciate your frankness and your critique. It will help me to have more reflection on what I make.
I'm agree with the glare of the window, I'll improve it if it happens again ;-)
The bunch is "death in the middle" without some other composition because I wanted to take a photography of the bunch only.
As for the rest, I'll improve!

Byonder>> I just wanted to take the beauty of the plastic keychains Thanks for the suggestion!

Michelle>> Thanks for the suggestions and encouragement!

Thank you all for visit and critique. It is very good to have various opinions!